Vaslious's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Effluo]

Nice artsy piece

It accuratly portrayed the lonlyness of the elderly that are put in homes. Really a fine flash to watch. I applaude you also for you choice in music, it adds to the effect.

[Kid Niki - BTGS version]

Excellent Sprite Movie

That is exactly who you make a sprite movie good, i was very impressed. Nice use of audio and good job keeping the characters for getting too distorted on the close-ups.

Nice!

cap123 responds:

Thanks Paulz, i was going to show this to the sprite club but then i had to go to bed! :D

[The Newgrounds army]

Excellent work

Nice job of presenting the Army's info in this flash.

The forum link chops off the NGA site page before the registration link.

Divisions are also cut off

Rules are also cut off.

Maybe if it displayed the link onscreen so someone can just type it in. The linker buttons aren't much help as it is now. Keep up the hard work.

[Cool Things 046]

hehe

I remember you saying you wanted to make a flash were OCP gets his ass kicked. Well played. I'll have to show it to his, i'm sure he'll get a kick out of it. You should go further with the violence though. Loller would be doing much more violent things to OCP if given the chance.

~Dragon_Lock~

psychojester responds:

he has seen it befor, I submitted this originally months ago but he whistled it cause he is a faggot.

[Thr333 Losers]

Needs a little work

1) Try optimizing the audio (ie change audio from Event=>Stream)

2) Animate you characters more

3) shorten the views of the car, they make this a really boring flash.

4) try to add a little more content as far as the characters go. They really didn't do much.

[Miko Miko NURSE!]

interesting

This was the first random flash i acutually sat through to the end. Although i don't care for most random animations this one was well intergrated and the series of events flowed well from one thing to the next. Good Job.

[Dear Negative,]

Come Back!

Thanks PJ for putting this out. I don't know what to do with all these LL forums. Negative is the glue that keeps the boat from sinking. Nice flash, it really captured the feeling we're all experiencing.

~Dragon_Lock~

[Legend of Teenagers Demo]

okay

To optimize the audio, make sure its in mp3 form. Add the audio to the stage, and select "Stream". This will compress the audio ad make this flash around 300kb.

The animation should be focased on more, it was choppy. Also, the storyline was odd, i didn't follow it. Work on it a little more and it should pass just fine.