Vaslious's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Steven Seagal Show #1]

Welcome back!

Has it been 11 years already? Glad your bringing it back to NG!

ken9000 responds:

I can't believe it's been 11 years. I'm such an old man.

[Fighting Orbs]

i don't know what to say

Obviously you have flash experience so i'm suprised you submitted something like this. The graphics weren't good, you used the wide pencil tool ineffectively, the yellow screen was annoying to look at and the only decent visual imagery was the energy waves. I'd add better sound fx also, it needs them.

BlackFire295 responds:

Oookay... this coming from a person WHO CAN'T ANIMATE WORTH CRAP! EVEN YOUR GROUP ANIMATIONS SUCK! OMG! SHUT THE FUCK UP! IF I USE ALL THAT WRONG! THEN YOUR SHIT MAKES BABY JESUS CRY BLOOD!!

[dice kid]

Needs work

Some of the graphics were very poorly drawn or incomplete. Although their was some good drawings in places, the flash was overall lacking. Also, increasing the content of the plot will make this better, it was hard to follow.

FrostedMonkeyFlakes responds:

yeah, i know some of the drawing were not all that great...but they where what i wanted... and i realize rambo was done in a totally different style than the rest, he was accually pulled from a different flash that i had given up on. Icreasing the content of the plot huh? i didn't realize that it had any plot at all. Thank you for a true review of the movie, It's nice to see that some people take it seriously, even if i don't seem to in my responces.

[((( Chill Skate 2 )))]

Not Flash

This is not the appropriete forum for displaying home movies. This was just an imported video.

Masta-GrassHoppa responds:

no its fucking not. i want to see YOU import a video you made your self. see how much people you gotta deal with, everyone will turn your back on you! yeah, think about it looser. internet bitch. try it.

[MetalGear]

Needs a little work

Here's what you can add to boost the score:
1) Decorate the backgrounds, plain white is boring to look at.
2) Add shadow to the stickmen, that's the one thing most stick animators don't even bother to do.

Things i liked:
1) The scope was cool, but if there was orange filling in between the orange line (alpha=20) in addition to the sweeper, it'd be a bit more accurate.
2) The blood stains on the wall after the gun shot was cool, maybe add a pool of blood too.

Overall not bad

killfrog69 responds:

actually u no i was gona put light color and especially shadows but i was too tired and bored so im like ill do it next episode. but thanx!

[- Chrono Trigger Trailer]

Nice trailer

I think i've seen a couple of drawn Chrono Trigger flashes before but this was pretty good. Is this a trailer for the game or are you going to make a full flash out of this?

Good job.

Quimera responds:

cool, see the other submission i have too!

[TOG3TH3R Beginnings]

It was okay

The artwork was pretty good, there just needed to be more stuff going on sometimes. The Narration wasen't good and neither was the moments where there was text over the States, (the text & States were poorly drawn).

As far as characters go, they were well drawn and had amusing facial expressions.

Overall not bad, you just need to work on the presentation a little better because the plot was lost in some places.

MC-Huggies responds:

Lol I know. I noticed that there were some boring parts with no action, so I'm gonna work on that next time. I also drew the text in the beginning when I probably shouldn't have... and detail on California could've been a lot better. Thx

[The singing squash]

Hmm

I'm not sure what you actually did to this movie. Since it's not a flash animation but rather a imported movie clip, this may not be the best place to display your work.

Here's my take:
1) Voice was annoying
2) The mouth added on to the squash reminded me of the Quizno's hamsters i dislike
3) The death of the squash was the only plot in this movie clip.

mr-wheatley responds:

what did i do to this movie? I made it.
What's your problem, theres plenty of movie files on newgrounds.
the clip is 10 seconds long. what are you talking about 'plot points' it's a one off gag. The voice is meant to be annoying. I can't help it if it reminded you of Quizno's. thanks for taking the time to comment.